I feel pleased to say that I've studied poetry for some time now with Matthew. Every week we delve into the work of a particular poet. This week we studied
Joanna Solfrian. Matthew commented about Solfrian's poem '
First Snowstorm, 2003,' "It's a slow poem, a quiet poem. I guess, all poems about snow try to be slow and quiet. Snow has that effect. Wouldn't it be interesting to write a poem about snow that was loud and fast?" The effect of his words made an image in mind of thunderbolts through falling, wind-blown snow, a response to semantics that I often find fascinating. But this week's exercise has more to do with having three or more abstractions to weave in one poem, which Solfrian does effectively in "First Snowstorm" as she touches upon a church, a snow, a belly-ache, childhood, and death. I chose the appearance of a gnome at my doorstep the same day I returned home with three rose plants. My first observation during the exercise came quickly, and now helps me to articulate that a work alluding to, or weaving together several things adds depth to a poem or a story. Note: I have not heard yet about the golf gnome. I left her on Ann's doorstep, and that is the last I saw or heard about her.
First Gnome
At Garden Club last month I learned
Plant the rose bushes on Good Friday
and I with the brown thumb wait
the upright thorny green stalks
with a scant few leaves sit by the window
waiting with me for Good Friday
I walk outside my front door
to get my mail and see a gnome
standing on my front porch
looking up at me. I blink and ask
Are you here to live among my roses?
but looking closely at him --
rather, her, I see she wears a skirt
despite her beard, and a necklace
from which dangles flamingos
and in her hands she holds a golf ball.
To confirm her gender she calls
herself Juliette, and she hands me a note
Please take on this mission. Please
take on this mission. Take me to a
golfer's home and leave me on her porch.
Will you return by Good Friday?
but I thought better about asking her
to live among my pink hybrid roses
her skirt being tangerine, her gnome hat red --
What would Garden Club think about that?